Matt Bellamy

Hello! This has potential, it just isn't very strong at the moment. First, a few niggly things: I think the elipses at the end of the fourth line are unnecessary. ...

Hello! I don't tend to read what other people have said already, so apologies if I'm repeating anybody. Let's go! The night she died was one worth remembering, it was ...

Hello! This has potential, just a few things though: I'm sick of being anonymous. Hiding in the depths of dark. The full stop at the end of this sentence makes ...

Hello! This is a very interesting piece. There are a few ideas in here which I think could definitely be expanded on. For example, the "melancholy blossom who always smiles" ...

Hello! I quite liked this piece. It's written in a very narrative kind of way, very observant. I do like the style of writing, however I think that in some ...

I normally only review poems, so I can't really say very much here, but what I can say is that I really enjoyed this. I haven't read episode one, but ...

Hello! Welcome to YWS. We do ask that everyone writes two reviews themselves before posting their own work. This is an interesting poem. It takes a few reads, which is ...

Hello! I quite like this poem, but as always there is room for improvement! I like the first stanza, however why do you need to "cover the space"? It sounds ...

Hello! Welcome to YWS. We do ask that everyone reviews two pieces of work before posting their own. I like the idea of this poem. The rhyming isn't forced and ...

Okay, let's dive straight in! You said "starts" twice in the first stanza, it sounds a little repetitive. Not sure about the "and" here either, it seems unnecessary. I'm imagining ...

Hello! Welcome to YWS. Please note that we have a 2:1 policy here, meaning that members are asked to review two pieces of work before posting their own. I quite ...

Hello! Firstly, sorry if I say anything which is repeating anyone else; reading other people's reviews deterrs me if they've already said what I was thinking. The first stanza is ...

I really like the description in this and the images it puts in my mind. However, who is "he"? He is only mentioned once, is he important? The second stanza ...

I love how you formatted the words at the beginning to look like stairs! Also, the slow progression of describing the character. It is very difficult to write in second ...

Hi, welcome to YWS! Please note that we have a 2:1 rule here, meaning that members should review two poems or stories by other members before posting their own. You ...